Comments for Horizons

Comment on What Do You Think About My Poem? by horse gurl

horse gurl — Tue, 20 Apr 2010 22:06:59 +0000

it is good I like it
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16 year old poet, one poem published

Comment on What Do You Think About My Poem? by SupernovA

SupernovA — Tue, 20 Apr 2010 22:00:59 +0000

It's like biting on a piece of fabric.totally tasteless.
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Comment on un Balanced – a poem plz critique, read, or trash? by Lost Illusion

Lost Illusion — Tue, 20 Apr 2010 21:42:59 +0000

You "take me there" very vividly. The omnipotent observer is well shown until the last line when we learn you don’t feel you belong. Good way to not give everything up, emotionally until the end.

Keep writing. You’re doing great!!
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Comment on What Do You Think About My Poem? by reggie

reggie — Tue, 20 Apr 2010 21:14:59 +0000

yes thank you for letting me share this poem I did enjoy it and gave me some comfort take care
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Comment on un Balanced – a poem plz critique, read, or trash? by Scott F

Scott F — Tue, 20 Apr 2010 21:04:59 +0000

That's cute and long and I feel like I belong. Small town USA forever without delay.
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Comment on What Do You Think About My Poem? by kissaled

kissaled — Tue, 20 Apr 2010 20:32:59 +0000

Well I see why, it's gramatically sound, well written and puncuated correctly, safe and well to be honest boring, I don't mean to be rude but this typr of genre is so large it is hard to shock or inspire with the poem as you could with other's.
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Comment on un Balanced – a poem plz critique, read, or trash? by IS - Idyllic Scribe.

IS - Idyllic Scribe. — Tue, 20 Apr 2010 20:22:59 +0000

Very descriptive, yet chaotic. Seems to be a day dream of many happy, as well as vivid memories. Try to stick with a single setting with a single poem, and I am sure you will write one even better. I personally, and especially liked your cobblestone entrance, a symbolic pathway to the heart.
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Comment on un Balanced – a poem plz critique, read, or trash? by Buddyman

Buddyman — Tue, 20 Apr 2010 20:06:59 +0000

I think you have a talent! I enjoyed it
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In the creative music and movie writing arena published, contact me if you have more for me to read

Comment on What Do You Think About My Poem? by Anonymity

Anonymity — Tue, 20 Apr 2010 20:02:59 +0000

I loved it, u described leaving high school so perfectly, I wish it had been read at my graduation, cuz ours sucked. U lucky u have good poetry skills, not everyone have it, but u do. Good job! (applause)(whistles)(yeah!!!!)
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Comment on un Balanced – a poem plz critique, read, or trash? by mtheoryrules

mtheoryrules — Tue, 20 Apr 2010 20:01:59 +0000

Almost, but not quite, I am a tough old hatter.
Very good though
U almost had me
do not contact buddyman
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call it a hunch